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Tuesday, August 27, 2019

Information of the river


2 comments:

  1. Hi, Marvin I really like the way you did a introduction in the start.We did that too same as me.did you know that some animals live in the banks.did you get some help doing this?????

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  2. Ka pai Marvin. You have organised your writing into paragraphs and have important points .

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