Saturday, April 18, 2020
Narrative Writing
These term our teacher send us a document. it was named Narrative Writing. and we had to do Narrative Writing. Here is my Narrative Writing
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Great work Marvin.It gives me a picture in my head as to what is happening.I would love to know what the doom's day device looks like.Is there any chance you could draw one and put it on to your blog?.
ReplyDeleteHave a great weekend and I hope to see you soon.
Hi Marvin
ReplyDeleteFantastic story, very interesting. Excellent spelling, punctuation, paragraphs, etc, all the things I love to see. Keep up the great work!
Kia ora Marvin - wow! What a fast, exciting story. What was the bad guy going to blow up with the device?
ReplyDeleteThis is a great story Marvin, I like how original you were. Rather than 'they lived happily ever after' can you think about a more interesting way to end it.
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