Friday, July 26, 2019
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Interesting recount. Nicely organised into paragraphs. Overall good punctuation as well Marvin. Please re-read your final copy to check for grammar and spelling, just to make sure you have great quality work.
ReplyDeleteHello Marvin. It's your cousin Krystallynna. I read your writing on the holidays and it was amazing! The part I liked in the lion king was the funny parts. And I also had fun at the International Antactic centre. Have a great day Marvin and see you at school tomorow!
ReplyDeletehey Marvin I'm Peter your blogger buddy. It's filled with words with SO MUCH detail. And like how you put three paragraphs in. Next time maybe don't say "and" so much. I really like those things and I love how you put it all into a story,
ReplyDeletegood job from your buddy-Peter.