We have bin making some books in book creator. And we had to have orientation, problem and solution.
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I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. I am a Year 5 and my teacher is Miss Scott. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful in your comments.
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Helpful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Very well done Marvin. I love the characters you have created. The mixture of your drawings and the pictures makes neat visuals! Your story has a great problem and solution, and now a sequel??
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hi Marvin i like how you introduced the characters before you got into the action. i liked how cash and dash did not get out themselves their family went on some sort of saving mission to get them out and trap the mad scientist good story Marvin!
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