Hi today I have took a photo of my narrative writing and we had to write about a picture and it was a picture of a girl looking down and she was looking at the ocean I hope you like my narrative writing here it is.
Friday, August 28, 2020
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Talofa Marvin! This is a big story!Maybe next time write more about what your doing about this. But I really like the way you write ' To be continued' at the end! I hope you reply back! Bye! See you on Monday!
ReplyDeleteWell done Marvin. Can't wait for the continuation of your story.
ReplyDeleteWow i love how you come up with this story Marvin. Not to mention you are only 10 years old. Keep it up and looking forward to your next blog xx
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