The fight started with The Avengers found out that Venom got more stronger. The Avengers ran to the Out Of Control Venom ( aka OOC Venom ). The Avengers and OOC Venom got into a fight and they got spat at from OOC Venom. Iron Man got Venom Armor Captain America and Hulk got Venom fists and Thor can turn into anything.
thank you for reading my blog and I hope that you like the whole story of The Cursed Avengers bye
I liked the way you started your story Marvin.The first sentence dragged me in and made me want to read more.
ReplyDeleteI did get a bit lost after that though.You've got some great ideas.
Maybe re-read your work to make sure that it makes sense before you hit the publish button.
Hi Marvin,your story is interesting. Try not repeat the same word ie(control) too many times. i liked your ideas and good imagination. Keep up the goood work.Love you
ReplyDeleteVery interesting story Marvin but was a little confused towards the end. Looking forward to read more stories from you
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